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 Post subject: You know... (NGE fanfic discussion)
PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:54 pm 
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Looking back at my fic 'Trepidation' I find I LOVE the tactic I used there. Use honey and happy things to lure the readers in for the first few chappies. Then...as they love the characters, spring your dark fic trap ;P Seriously...lol. It's not anything new, just greatly affective. I try a new tactic for each fic. So far that was the most effective out of ten.


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:20 am 
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:gasps: You don't kill all the favorite characters do you? T_T That's done often in anime and it pulls at my tear ducts.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:49 am 
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That's a mean, but classic tactic, Sideris. I didn't think you were THAT heartless. :P


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 9:24 am 
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Read the fic and find out how deep the rabbit hole goes...And to Kamaji, kill them all? No, not at all >>

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Whatever do you mean ;P

I only kill two, one major the other secondary, but for my fic, she's a major player. Read and find out!! :D


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 9:30 am 
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2600732/1/

Here she is!

Warning: Graphic violence, language and some sexual situations are in the fic you're about to read ;P Thought I'd give a lil' warning just to cover myself lol!


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 9:41 am 
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Btw, I've jumbled up the Angels a bit for the story, so don't think I simply messed them up, I just used them as I saw fit :D


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:50 am 
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Whoa...lost count of the no. of times the 'Point of View' shifted about in the first half of the first chapter alone ^^

Nice details of Maya waking up though. The alarm clock thing was amusing :)

Isn't Maya a doctor of sorts (shoulder length blonde hair) and quite mature?

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:26 am 
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I think you're referring to Ritsuko. Maya is the brunette. ^_^


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:46 am 
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Saucium wrote:
I think you're referring to Ritsuko. Maya is the brunette. ^_^


Awww...Ok...what you get from watching just 4 eps I guess ^^

I liked the Doctor ^^

I know less bout Evangelion then the newbies know about Kana...so that's the trade off I guess :P

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:00 pm 
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That's okay. Maybe we can help each other out? 8)


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:02 pm 
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Saucium wrote:
That's okay. Maybe we can help each other out? 8)


Hehe...It's been years since NGE's been released - I don't think I'll be bothering anyoneon in it anytime soon ^^

Kana-wise, all of us here are more than happy to help you and Sid out though :)

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:15 pm 
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kochan wrote:

Kana-wise, all of us here are more than happy to help you and Sid out though :)

Ko-Chan


Much appreciated. Thanks. ^_^


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:24 pm 
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kochan wrote:
Saucium wrote:
I think you're referring to Ritsuko. Maya is the brunette. ^_^


Awww...Ok...what you get from watching just 4 eps I guess ^^

I liked the Doctor ^^

I know less bout Evangelion then the newbies know about Kana...so that's the trade off I guess :P

Ko-Chan


Rits...yeah...you'll find her...surprising later in the series >.> That's all I gotta say about that.


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:46 pm 
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So re-read the ending I made for Trepidation and I got depressed and teared up a little. Yes, it was the first time I really READ it, I remember writing it, but I hardly ever really read it. So I'm writing something new :D A somewhat happier tale for Shinji and Maya...


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